John example essay topic

The Kidnapper Clouds filled the dark sky. Street lamps flickering fiercely along the free kingly frightening street. Mist. Everywhere.

Suddenly, rain poured from the heavens above. Tick-Tock. Midnight. A stench of sewage crept slowly around the misty silent street. John was driving along the gloomy street. BANG!

The car suddenly stopped. It wouldn't start again. He got out cautiously and walks over to the hood. He could see nothing wrong. There were no pay phones in sight and his battery was dead on his age old cellular phone. John sat there waiting for another car to come past.

Nothing. One whole hour had gone by when he noticed e eire moaning sounds coming from the graveyard behind him. He then heard a scream. John thought to himself, should he check it out? What if someones in trouble?

He began slowly walking towards the gate when he heard another scream. His heart went. He was thinking twice about this. As he opened the tall creaky gate, a black cat jumped screaming out of a tree and on to is face leaving him with a cut. The cat ran off.

He advanced further into the graveyard. The cut was stinging as if three hundred nails were forced into his face at once. He came closer to the screams when he saw the church: it was an old, battery bruised church. Not in use no more he thought untill he glanced up and noticed a light was on upstairs. John walked around the other side of the church only to see a big white van parked outside the backdoor. It was rocking back and forth.

He could not here any more screams but could hear this mumbling coming from inside the van. John opened the van door and saw a young women must have been about twenty one, all tied up and had tape across her mouth. He took the tape off her mouth and she cried "Help! Please!" John claimed "Il do my best". Suddenly, she screamed "Behind you!" Whack.

John fell to the floor looked up to see a man holding a shovel. John thought to himself if he pretended to be unconscious he might be able to get an advantage on him. As the man climbed in the van, ready to go, John jumped up quickly and pulled him from the seat and ended up on the floor in a brawl. The man happend to get the better of John and ended up knocking him out anf tieng him up too.

The man threw him in the van. The car started to go. Blackness was all he could see. He could tell the girl was rumbling around to break free, but it was no use.

It must have been two o'clock in the morning by then. He fell asleep. Slam! a door closed, then the side door opened. Vigour sly he grab be them and guided them into some, some sort of building. The man sat them down on a chair them to eachother. The man left the room.

Silence. Darkness. John once again fell asleep. Boom!

"Clear. Clear. hold it right there. Dont move!"No!" Bang bang. Gun shots were fired.

It smelt like fireworks. Suddenly, someone ripped the tape from Johns' eyes. With his b lured vision he could roughly make out it was police. "Its going to be ok" he heard.

He was untied and was put in an flashing ambulance. "Would you like a cup of tea sir?" a nurse asked, "No im fine thanks" John answered. As he lay there, in the grimy hospital bed, he began to think what he got himself into. Then right there in the bed next to him was...

The Kidnapper!