New Car example essay topic

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Story One love the feeling of wind going through my hair and going so fast in my new car. I used to dream about going for drives with friends every night before I got my license. I only recently got my license. My friends, all still without cars are constantly calling me asking me if we can go for a drive. Because I'm a new driver and love the feeling of being free and independent while driving without parents constantly whining I did say yes whenever I was free. Friday was the big night; the best hi-hop dance party there ever will be in Sydney.

There were five of the worlds best hip-hop DJ's as well as many live acts, I cant say how many for sure. My friends and I had arranged to go there four months in advance. I made sure that morning that I had enough petrol in the car and that the car was in good working condition, which it was since it is a new car. We set off to the dance at half past seven pm as arranged. We were all ready to have the best time ever at that dance, already on the way there in the car the music was blasting and everyone was singing along and having a good time. When we arrived, the DJ's were already playing music and the people there seemed to be in a trance.

After being there for a very short amount of time, I myself felt as though I was in a trance. When the dance was over, we all got in the car. I was driving so safe, I hadn't had one drink, I promise. Another car just appeared out of nowhere in front of me and... well we hit, the next thing I remember is darkness. I can't remember one detail after.

Officer please don't blame me, I really was so careful and I'm already going to be here on this hospital bed for another six weeks. I've told you everything now, please just answer my question, just one please! How are my friends? Are they ok?

Please tell me! Ok, I know its more than one question, but please tell me, the nurse refuses to tell me and everyone I ask avoids answering. Please. "All of them... they " re all... dead.